First poster Idea:

I do really like this first idea, because people are wondering why its got a picture of a barn on the front but its then called a "Children's Picnic" , i like this because its then making the audience think what is going to happened? what is in side the barn that they dont want to see ? And i think that its good that i have built up the suspense of the film trailer. I decided to use writing that sort of looks like its blood is running from the writing, becuase it is a thriller trailer and i wanted it too look spooky and scary i think that this writing is working well with the whole background etc. I have put the "Childrens Picnic" at the top of the page, and then i have put a another sentence saying "Run but dont look back" I have put this at the bottom, im not too sure if this works that well because i dont know if its a bit all over the place, but apart from that i am pleased with my first idea.